NovaRose

That was pretty funny! The last line was a bit confusing- who are the Cat and the Dog? You never refer to anyone in the book as "the Cat" or ...

Wow... I'm shocked. I love your writing style. The only thing I noticed was the phrase "seized the pain" which should be "eased the pain." Wow, what a horrible thing ...

Wow! This is the most I've read of anyone else's story besides my best friends'! It must be good lol. "Mars in spring is not as beautiful as the holographic ...

Awesome! You write very well, CL. Just a few things I noticed: "This time I’m floating through space on the wings of a Lightbearer – a space angel for better ...

I wouldn't have read this if I hadn't read your other books, but now I think I'll probably read more poetry, especially your stuff. The thing I like most about ...

"he seemed to glow with a glowing, blood red aura" Um, redundant? "Killing as not in this man’s nature" -was, not as "My fist exploded in a shower of pain ...

actually you dont have to read anything prior to the LOTR trilogy, but I suggest reading the Sillmarillion and also the Atlas of Middle-Earth. My friend is visiting and had ...

Oooh! Creepy. I think Misty did a good enough job of pointing out most of the errors in this, but there's just one thing I want to point out about ...

Awesome sauce! Just a few things- at the beginning of the prologue, where it says "causing several loose bricks from the old mortared buildings to come crashing down onto the ...

Hunter, ya beat me to it. I love your stile, Soy, but- well, talk about pessimism! Love should be "butterflies and rainbows," whether it always is or not. And most ...

Well, dono, that was the biggest piece of crap ever and you're stupid and you dont no how 2 speel. Actually, I kinda liked this poem. The repetition works for ...

Hah! I got there first. In case Emma can't find any avatars, I made a few quick ones. I can add text to them if you'd like.

Short but sweet. Don't like the language, but I never do in any case. It certainly shows that you're really PO'd. I just didn't really feel the emotion so much ...

Looks like El kinda said the same thing I was thinking. When you changed the dialogue about the Ruler's party, you forgot to change the part where Tinloseph is wondering ...

Too true. Somewhat brief for an essay or anything, but good ideas. As for that last paragraph, I was just thinking about writing something about the term "Native American" and ...