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Hi, I just want to start by saying that I love your story! I love how you use time and love like real people and how you made me empathize ...

Please, please, please use quotation marks! I could hardly focus on your story due to the lack of them. Commas too, please. The plot was interesting but the beginning was ...

Hey, first off I wanted to say that I'm happy you found the lord! I know how much it can suck to go through bad times, i've been through some ...

I'm appologizing in advance because some of this will seem nitpicky or may just be my own preference. I'm also still figuring out how to work this thing, so wish ...

I love the message of your story, and I hate to do it, but here's my review as I went through (I promise it'll get better once I'm done picking ...

I visualized every word. Your poem is extremely well executed and I enjoyed every word of it. The meaning is great, good theme (if that's the right word to call ...

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I visualized every word. Your poem is extremely well executed and I enjoyed every word of it. The meaning is great, good theme (if that's the right word to call ...

Visualization was great, but you need to remember capatilization. It's beautifully executed, flows well, and is generally good poetry. I have a vague idea of what it is about, but ...

I like what you're doing. The sentences do flow together nicely, but I honestly don't know how I feel about the white wolf repetition. I see what you're trying to ...