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Re: avalanche of time
Hello! I really like this poem! I love the meaning of the poem.I love the use of metaphors, and comparing time passing to glaciers melting (at least I think that ...
Jun 5, 2020 -
Re: Napo day#1: ode to a dragon
What can I say about this masterpiece? It was beautiful! I loved the rhyming scheme of it and the story that it told! Honestly, even though a review is supposed ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: four, cold slate
I love this. It speaks poetry. (As if I know lol). But I love the deep thoughts in it, and I love how it kinda has a rhythm, that just ...
Mar 31, 2019 -
Re: People Said
Wow. So short yet it hits you so hard. This is like emotionally deep. Like, I don't know you or anything, but I want to comfort you. This poem is ...
Mar 21, 2019 -
Re: The Rabbit and the Hen
Hello! I really liked what you did here. I love when the hen fell and hung upside down. It would've been funny if the hen fell on the ground and ...
Mar 21, 2019 -
Re: The Ugly Truth About Slippers
I Love how this is like a funny horror, more funny but still. It's pretty amazing, short stories are always cool. I love how it was just a slipper, it ...
Mar 21, 2019 -
Re: creation and the fall
I love this so much! I really love the deep meaning of it, its really interesting! You really check for grammar and mistakes, cause I couldn't find one. I love ...
Mar 21, 2019
