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Re: Not Hypothetically Dead Anymore
Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested! (finally) I have succeeded in to getting him to get rid of that trilby; so now his face looks more oval with ...
Sep 24, 2012 -
Re: Untitled Ch. 1. The Person Offering Piano Lessons Is Definitely (Not!) a Creeper
Hi there! Okay, I'm going to start off with the part that NightWriter commented was too rushed. Instead of telling you the same thing, I'm going to try and help ...
Sep 20, 2012 -
Re: Hotel of the lost
Hi there! Okay, so I just want to say that I am in love with this poem. No really, it's amazing. This idea is great and you did a good ...
Sep 13, 2012 -
Re: Rant of a Calculus Student
I'm a writer, aren't I? So why ... w hy did I take Calculus? AP ; since the normal wasn't hard enough. Now, And I don't get it. And I ...
Sep 13, 2012 -
Re: Buildings
Hi there! :) I see Big Ben- a typical building Just plain and uneventful Apart from the fact it's all shiny *this line sounds really cheesy to me. Is there ...
Sep 12, 2012 -
Re: deleted
Hi there! They’re all looking at me. ‘Cause W ho wouldn’t? I’m supposed to be the strong one. I ’m supposed to have it all together. If anyone should get ...
Sep 12, 2012 -
Re: Peeta and Katniss - Forever Together
Hi there! I noticed that you didn't have any comments or reviews on this story. :( I know you posted this back in January and have probably forgotten about it, ...
Sep 11, 2012 -
Re: Old
Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. :) Everyone inside the house is far too busy laughing, drinking or grinding against each other like a bunch of rabbits on ...
Sep 10, 2012 -
Re: Cascades of Time (Chp 6)
Hi there! Like I said in the previous chapter, you're finally starting to link together all of the characters. The constant change of POV is a little confusing to me, ...
Sep 6, 2012 -
Re: Cascades of Time (Chp 5)
Hi there! I really hate this president lady. I hate her so much I'm not even going to bother using her name. She's too concerned about how the base incident ...
Sep 6, 2012 -
Re: Desolate: Chapter Two
Hi there! I finally made it over to review. Here I am traveling through a town that holds all of my childhood memories within it's crumbling avenues with Charolette's little ...
Sep 6, 2012 -
Re: Volume 1
Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. Overall this is a nice piece. It's a little confusing because of the voices, but I liked it. It's a nice tale ...
Sep 6, 2012 -
Re: La Mercz: L'Invasion de Paree - I/II
Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. I'll split this review into two parts like the piece is. I. I really couldn't find anything wrong with this part so ...
Sep 6, 2012 -
Re: Love Like Clockwork 2
Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. Again, sorry for the late response to your request. I finished my anatomy lecture at St Bart’s a little after one, but ...
Sep 6, 2012 -
Re: Love Like Clockwork 1
Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. I'm so sorry. For some reason, I didn't get a notification that you posted on my WRFF thread so I thought I ...
Sep 6, 2012
