Noelle

Hi there! I really like the title . It makes me think of Toy Story, which in turn brings up so many thoughts about growing up. Then reading this and ...

Hi there! Oh dear, I haven't reviewed this in over a month! D: So sorry about that. It was two forty-five in the evening and the sun was scorching. 2:45 ...

Hi there! Just a few things before I get into the specifics of the review. I really enjoy this story. When I read a short story I'm looking for that ...

Hi there! Sooooo I totally read the end first while I was scrolling down to get to the review box. I just have to say this: greatest two sentences I ...

Hi there! I'm not a big fan of the introduction of Wesley's name here at the beginning. The first sentence is wonderful, giving us an idea of the memory we're ...

Hi there! First off, I don't quite understand the transition between chapters. At the end of the first chapter we were in Merah's house. Now we're suddenly at the school ...

Hi there! Look at me finally getting to the reviews I promised forever ago. Go me -_- I like how you've stepped out of the boundaries of a "normal" poem. ...

Hi there! Creeeepy... I have to say I really enjoyed reading this. The story gripped me right away and I couldn't pull myself back out again. I was there with ...

Hi there! I haven't read the previous chapters in a while so please excuse any of my ignorance. Also sorry for taking so long to get to this. It was ...

Hi there! I would read all of the other reviews but I'm too lazy to. Feel free to ignore anything that I may repeat. First off, I can tell you ...

Hi there! Oh dear, I have a lot of chapters to catch up on. I'll get to them all, promise :) I started a review of chapter 2, but then ...

Hi there! I promised myself that I would review this as soon as I got time and I have a few minutes to spare. Go me. I absolutely love this ...

Hi there! I'm running a bit behind on my reviews and I apologize for getting here so late. But I'm here now so let's get to it! Memories, held behind ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. Again, I'm sorry it took me a while to get to this. I want to talk about the religious aspect here for ...

Hi there! I'm so excited for this you have no idea ^_^ The beginning lacks a bit of detail. We get the bare bones here: she's in the woods, people ...