Noelle

Hi there! I love this!! It was written very well and kept me interested throughout the whole piece. I am a HUGE Harry Potter fan, so I was excited to ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed this. The words are great and it all flows together so well. The general idea is good. Your rhyme scheme is off though. At the ...

Hi there! I'm here to review as requested! I enjoyed this, but it left me with a lot of questions. To me, instead of being a 150 word story, this ...

Hi there! This is a great start! I like the fact that it started off with a bang. I'm glad you got right into it at the beginning. I really ...

Hi there! This was a great piece! I quite enjoyed it. I have always wondered, what would we all do if Jesus walked into the room? This seems to be ...

Hi there! This was a great piece. It caught my interest and kept me reading through the whole thing. The conversation was intriguing and made me think. "Are you sure ...

Hi there! I like this, it's really good. It flows well and has nothing I can find to correct. I'm not a huge fan of cussing, but if it works ...

Hi there! Sudden adrenaline, horror start s to shove, You forgot the 's' at the end. Visions of Pradise start of to become clear, It should be 'to' instead of ...

Hi there! I'm here to review, a requested. :) This was a really good piece. I enjoyed reading it! It was written well (only a few grammer mistakes) and was ...

Hi there! This was a good story. I enjoyed it. The idea is very original, I know I would've never come up with this! I can could see trough through ...

Hi there! Since this is a contest entry (and you requested this) I am going to review a little harsher than I usually would. Please don't take it personally if ...

Hi there! First off I want to let you know that I enjoyed reading this. It kept me guessing the whole time. My suggestions are in red in the spoiler. ...

Hi there! This was a really good piece of poetry. Unfortunatly, like IcyFlame, I'm not a poet either, but the one thing I understand about poetry is the flow. That's ...

Hi there! I enjoyed reading this poem. I could tell you put a lot of thought into it and that it's very personal. How could I when it only causes ...

Hi there! This was a very touching piece. It actually almost made me cry because I've heard so many stories like this. It was an interesting read, but it was ...