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Re: TFoA - Chapter 5 (Part 1 of 2) REVISED
Hi there! Noelle back again. I know I said I wouldn't mention this anymore, but I just really really want to point this out. “You really think you can beat ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: TFoA - Chapter 4 (Part 2 of 2) REVISED
Hi there! Noelle back again. This is just logistics really. You don't have to put the name of the narrator at the beginning of every part. We know that it's ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: TFoA - Chapter 4 (Part 1 of 2) REVISED
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Aww. I have to admit I'm a bit disappointed to see that this chapter is written from Daniel's POV. I ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: TFoA - Chapter 3 (Part 1 of 1) REVISED
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I'm determined to finish reviewing all of the chapters you have posted so let's get to it! I slept like a ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - 14: You Oughta Know
Hi there! I'm here! finally Sara said the exact same thing, in harmony with me. In unison, not harmony ;) It took me a while to come back to reviewing ...
Jun 24, 2015 -
Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 10.2
Hi there! I'm feeling nitpicky today. Beware :3 “You came back here yesterday already looking half dead. The 'already' is bothering me here. I don't know if it messes with ...
Jun 18, 2015 -
Re: TFoA - Chapter 2 (Part 2 of 2) REVISED
Hi there! Still working my way through this :) Once finished, I lean my legs against the fence. This is probably more of a personal preference than anything else, really. ...
Jun 18, 2015 -
Re: Chapter One: The Worst Last Name You've Ever Heard
Hi there! I'm here to save your chapter from the clutches of the Green Room. Since this is so long, I think I'll review as I go and save my ...
Jun 18, 2015 -
Re: OutKast: Symbols of War
Hi there! I'm here to save your chapter from the clutches of the Green Room. I read the Intro as well so I know everything going on. I'm wondering, is ...
Jun 17, 2015 -
Re: Imaginary Friend
Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. Sorry it took me a while to get here. Oh wow, you've got lots of god reviews now! Hopefully I can give ...
Jun 17, 2015 -
Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 10.1
Hi there! I had trouble reviewing this because it's such a great chapter. So expect a review on the shorter side. So now Epolis is over and the action will ...
Jun 12, 2015 -
Re: The Clock Remembrances- Chapter 2 ~does~
Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. And as I promised, I have indeed read the first chapter. ‘Why was he acting so weird,’ my head tilted to the ...
Jun 12, 2015 -
Re: Father Doesn't Like The Noise | Edited
Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. When reviewing poetry, I always start with a flyby of the poem, which is basically just when I tell you what I ...
Jun 12, 2015 -
Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 9.2
Hi there! Beware, I'm feeling nitpicky today. Also, this review might turn out being a bit harsh, and I apologize for that. There are just some things that I've been ...
Jun 10, 2015 -
Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 9.1
Hi there! Back again. Perhaps, this entire lifetime I thought I knew Carsten, I really didn’t. Whoa, he's giving up on him pretty quick o.o I know that he just ...
Jun 9, 2015
