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Noelle

if we didn't have words to read, write, and speak, I think I would die

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: TFoA - Chapter 5 (Part 1 of 2) REVISED

    Hi there! Noelle back again. I know I said I wouldn't mention this anymore, but I just really really want to point this out. “You really think you can beat ...

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: TFoA - Chapter 4 (Part 2 of 2) REVISED

    Hi there! Noelle back again. This is just logistics really. You don't have to put the name of the narrator at the beginning of every part. We know that it's ...

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: TFoA - Chapter 4 (Part 1 of 2) REVISED

    Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Aww. I have to admit I'm a bit disappointed to see that this chapter is written from Daniel's POV. I ...

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: TFoA - Chapter 3 (Part 1 of 1) REVISED

    Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I'm determined to finish reviewing all of the chapters you have posted so let's get to it! I slept like a ...

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: Imaginary Friends - 14: You Oughta Know

    Hi there! I'm here! finally Sara said the exact same thing, in harmony with me. In unison, not harmony ;) It took me a while to come back to reviewing ...

    Jun 24, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 10.2

    Hi there! I'm feeling nitpicky today. Beware :3 “You came back here yesterday already looking half dead. The 'already' is bothering me here. I don't know if it messes with ...

    Jun 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: TFoA - Chapter 2 (Part 2 of 2) REVISED

    Hi there! Still working my way through this :) Once finished, I lean my legs against the fence. This is probably more of a personal preference than anything else, really. ...

    Jun 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Chapter One: The Worst Last Name You've Ever Heard

    Hi there! I'm here to save your chapter from the clutches of the Green Room. Since this is so long, I think I'll review as I go and save my ...

    Jun 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: OutKast: Symbols of War

    Hi there! I'm here to save your chapter from the clutches of the Green Room. I read the Intro as well so I know everything going on. I'm wondering, is ...

    Jun 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Imaginary Friend

    Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. Sorry it took me a while to get here. Oh wow, you've got lots of god reviews now! Hopefully I can give ...

    Jun 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 10.1

    Hi there! I had trouble reviewing this because it's such a great chapter. So expect a review on the shorter side. So now Epolis is over and the action will ...

    Jun 12, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Clock Remembrances- Chapter 2 ~does~

    Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. And as I promised, I have indeed read the first chapter. ‘Why was he acting so weird,’ my head tilted to the ...

    Jun 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: Father Doesn't Like The Noise | Edited

    Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. When reviewing poetry, I always start with a flyby of the poem, which is basically just when I tell you what I ...

    Jun 12, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 9.2

    Hi there! Beware, I'm feeling nitpicky today. Also, this review might turn out being a bit harsh, and I apologize for that. There are just some things that I've been ...

    Jun 10, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 9.1

    Hi there! Back again. Perhaps, this entire lifetime I thought I knew Carsten, I really didn’t. Whoa, he's giving up on him pretty quick o.o I know that he just ...

    Jun 9, 2015


Who overcomes by force, hath overcome but half his foe.
— John Milton (Poet)