Noelle

Hi there! I've found it much easier for me to review poems if I simply quote them and write my comments in the quote. That being said, my comments are ...

Hi there! First I'd like to say that you did a good job pulling me in a keeping me reading. You did a great job keeping the story moving and ...

Hi there! This is reall good. I've read a lot or your lyrivs (probably four or five of them) and they never seem to disappoint. You really do a great ...

Hi there! I remember reading this a couple weeks ago (or maybe a couple days?) but I didn't comment on it, so here goes! My comments are in red below. ...

Hi there! I really like this poem. I don't know why, but I really like reading things about when blacks and whites weren't equal. Don't get me wrong, I'm not ...

Hi there! Wow, this sounds interesting. All right, my comments are in red below. one night your window was open so i sat on the window sill and watched you ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed reading this poem. It's short, but you did a good job using the right words and putting a lot of meaning into a small space. ...

Hi there! I really like your poem. It's short and sweet and to the point. Good job! You put some great emotion into this and really made it believable. Your ...

Hi there! My comments are in red below. You're always wearing a mask Afraid to show the world Who you really are Nice start. You never stop acting Never stop ...

Hi there! All right, my comments are below in bold . I'm walking through these empty halls filled with memories of you This sentence really sets the tone of the ...

Hi there! All right, my comments are in red below. A picture's worth a thousand words This is so true. is what they say, or so I've heard. But think ...

Hi there! All right, one nitpick: Soaked in bleach and drowning drowned in oil The rest of this is in past tense, make sure you're consistant with your tenses. One ...

Hi there! All right, my comments are in red below. W here to go The first word of the poem should be capilatized. what to do what to dream what ...

Hi there! All right, my comments are in red below. The Heart, beat, beat, beating I like the repitition! in our chests. Housing our lives; Nice line. Our heart really ...

Hi there! I could've sworn that I already reviewed this, but I guess not. I'll review it now then! My comments are in red below. I don't want a lover ...