NoOneInParticular

This is really amazibg! I think I’ll leave a review sometime tomorrow, but we’ll see if I don’t procrastinate this until next week

When I first started I had the very rough idea for the poem and kinda just%u2026made it up as I went along? I had some parts written out, then I ...

(Also this is actually your second time reviewing my poetry. The first one you commented on was titled %u201CDaydreaming%u201D)

Thanks for the review, Wist! I kind of ripped off the style from those videos you see on Youtube where they read out scrolling text that seems super depressing but ...

now read back up again! (I spent so long getting it to flow I apologise if it feels disjointed)

Thank you, and yup, you got the message right! Hope you have a nice day/night ahead!

Thank you for the feedback! This poem was intented to be sort of a rant, so that grammatical error was definitely intentional. It%u2019s funny how you described the AI%u2019s confusion ...

Also you got the backstory right. I was worried it%u2019d be confusing, so I%u2019m glad you got it!

Thanks for the review! I agree, breaking it into two paragraphs would look better, as well as putting %u201CThe Emissary laughed%u201D in the same paragraph. Emerald AKA the Ivy Knight ...

Thank you! Now that I look at it, it would be better to not have the slash between the two names and break then up into two paragraphs. Unfortunately, this ...

Thanks for the review! Pluto has a whole character arc in the series, so the source material was quite easy to work with, though I did change the story a ...

Thanks for reviewing! I considered incorporating some mythology into the story, but I wasn%u2019t sure how to include it. Glad you enjoyed!

I admit, the poem was kind of poorly planned-out, so I get the part where it could use more star-related imagery. Regarding the stanzas, I tried to give the sense ...

Wow, I did not expect to get this many comments saying they liked my work! Thanks so much for all the support! Hope you have a wonderful day ahead!

Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate your kind words.