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NivedaJames22

NivedaJames22

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: The Story Of An Introvert-1

    Please don't feel pressured to do this, but if it isn't too much trouble, could you please point out the typos? Thanks for reviewing!

    May 28, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Your Shoes

    Hey LilPWilly! I have a feeling this is gonna sound really stupid, but I didn't get what you meant by the P F vernancular. The sensory input is a really ...

    May 28, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Your Shoes

    Thank you! (:

    May 28, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: Bathrooms and Bad Zooms

    OMG THIS IS THE MOST RELATABLE FEELING EVER!! Great job Beast!

    May 27, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: How Pluto Loves the Sun

    True...

    May 10, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Reverence

    About the great people instead of poets, it's a good suggestion, but I don't really have any ideas so yeah... Thanks for reviewing! (:

    May 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: How Pluto Loves the Sun

    Wait...something happened in that quote. This is how it's supposed to be: "Have you heard about the poem of the sun and the earth?" Sati asked Shiva. "No,"said Shiva with ...

    May 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: How Pluto Loves the Sun

    Oh yeah, it's there in the Ram Chandra series as well...but there's a part where Sati tells Shiva about it. She doesn't recite it exactly, but she tells him about ...

    May 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: How Pluto Loves the Sun

    Yeah I know 'The Ballad of the Sun and the Earth'...I love the Shiva trilogy and when Sati recites this, it's just so beautiful. I also love the arrow of ...

    May 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: When Santa Forgot My Gift

    Thank you! (:

    May 9, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: The Death of a God

    Yes!!!

    May 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: When Santa Forgot My Gift

    Thank you! (:

    May 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: How Pluto Loves the Sun

    I hadn't picked up on those errors...I'll change them soon. Thanks for reviewing! (:

    May 4, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: When Santa Forgot My Gift

    I haven't heard that song...Imma go check it out now. It sounds funny. The one line stanza thing is because the whole poem is an acrostic that spells "Doth a ...

    May 4, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: When Santa Forgot My Gift

    Yeah, about the verses, they're mostly out of rhyme...I have to work on that when I get time. Thanks for reviewing! (:

    May 4, 2021


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