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NivedaJames22

NivedaJames22

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: The Story Of An Introvert-1

    Please don't feel pressured to do this, but if it isn't too much trouble, could you please point out the typos? Thanks for reviewing!

    May 28, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Your Shoes

    Hey LilPWilly! I have a feeling this is gonna sound really stupid, but I didn't get what you meant by the P F vernancular. The sensory input is a really ...

    May 28, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Your Shoes

    Thank you! (:

    May 28, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: Bathrooms and Bad Zooms

    OMG THIS IS THE MOST RELATABLE FEELING EVER!! Great job Beast!

    May 27, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: How Pluto Loves the Sun

    True...

    May 10, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Reverence

    About the great people instead of poets, it's a good suggestion, but I don't really have any ideas so yeah... Thanks for reviewing! (:

    May 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: How Pluto Loves the Sun

    Wait...something happened in that quote. This is how it's supposed to be: "Have you heard about the poem of the sun and the earth?" Sati asked Shiva. "No,"said Shiva with ...

    May 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: How Pluto Loves the Sun

    Oh yeah, it's there in the Ram Chandra series as well...but there's a part where Sati tells Shiva about it. She doesn't recite it exactly, but she tells him about ...

    May 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: How Pluto Loves the Sun

    Yeah I know 'The Ballad of the Sun and the Earth'...I love the Shiva trilogy and when Sati recites this, it's just so beautiful. I also love the arrow of ...

    May 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: When Santa Forgot My Gift

    Thank you! (:

    May 9, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: The Death of a God

    Yes!!!

    May 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: When Santa Forgot My Gift

    Thank you! (:

    May 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: How Pluto Loves the Sun

    I hadn't picked up on those errors...I'll change them soon. Thanks for reviewing! (:

    May 4, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: When Santa Forgot My Gift

    I haven't heard that song...Imma go check it out now. It sounds funny. The one line stanza thing is because the whole poem is an acrostic that spells "Doth a ...

    May 4, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: When Santa Forgot My Gift

    Yeah, about the verses, they're mostly out of rhyme...I have to work on that when I get time. Thanks for reviewing! (:

    May 4, 2021


I say Wolf, for all wolves are not of the same sort; there is one kind with an amenable disposition – neither noisy, nor hateful, nor angry, but tame, obliging and gentle, following the young maids in the streets, even into their homes. Alas! Who does not know that these gentle wolves are of all such creatures the most dangerous!
— Charles Perrault