NivedaJames22

Hey Froggy! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks a lot for reviewing!!

Thanks for the review!! (:

Thanks for the review!! (:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :D

Hey there! I'll try to fix those repeats, thanks for pointing that out. Thanks for reviewing! :D

Hey MayCupcake! Thanks for those critiques! Yeah, sleep would make more sense in the last line, and the line breaks that you've given are really nice. I'll fix that now. ...

Thanks! (:

Hey nightshadows! This was really good! The entire poem was really impactful and deep. I like how you repeat this stanza: One trip, One slip, One mistake, One shake. The ...

Oh okay. Thanks for pointing those errors. I'll change those soon.

Thank you!

Hey Mailice! Thanks for pointing out those errors about the punctuation...I'll change them soon. About the chapter, I agree. I think it's kind of brief. I guess I was kind ...

You're right about the Layla part...I've changed it to "lauded." Ruth is twelve right now, and all her classmates are also around twelve. Right now, it has only been a ...

Please don't feel pressured to do this, but if it isn't too much trouble, could you please point out the typos and the grammar errors? Thanks for reviewing! :D

Please don't feel pressured to do this, but if it isn't too much trouble, could you please point out the typos? I think the spaces in between the paragraphs came ...