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Thank you so much for the review! I'll work on the verb tense bit, thanks for the tip :>

thanks momo! :>

thank you! :>

ahh thanks! i usually don't do a lot of formatting, but this one looked a bit annoying when it was to the left. :>

Thank you alliyah! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reviewing vampricone! :>

I think when I was writing I was mostly thinking about the world doing the forgetting, and just erasing every memory of something that was a huge part of the ...

Thanks for reviewing Plume! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :>

Hey Plume!! Starting your beginning with "and" also lent itself to the idea that the readers were coming into something already in progress, furthering those ideas of the same cycle. ...

Thank you for sharing your interpretation! (:

Thank you! I'm glad you found it interesting! (:

Aww thank you. Of course. *follows*

Yeah, I think Via had pointed out the 'hill' thing as well. I was gonna change it and then it slipped my mind. Thanks for pointing it out! Thanks for ...

Hey Via! I agree about the flow and structure and rhythm, most of my poems could use a little work in those aspects. Thanks for those tips. Also, thanks for ...

Hey Jasper! Umm about the green leaves and monochromatic grey, I kind of wanted to present a contrast between the narrator's surroundings and how they feel inside. What I meant ...