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Celia-added material [2]
This is my first draft- I'm not editing it, just adding to and hoping it doesn't suck. I'm not trying to make any catching, subtle endings, just ending it as ...
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Gifted
First draft. Please read and comment, thanks. The café was filled to the brim with busy, bustling bees. The voices in the room were loud, obnoxious. Many of the people ...
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Through the Darkness
I wrote this last year, hah, guess I should mention.. I wrote this for nanowrimo in school. Everything is thick and uneeded because I was trying to bump up the ...
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Gifted- slightly edited and added writing
I'd appreciate it if you read and reviewed this. :3 Thanks a ton. The café was filled to the brim with busy, bustling bees. The voices in the room were ...
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Lorelei
Second attempt. =p I laughed, fingering the beautiful array of gems in the palms of my hands, rubbing my forefingers over their smooth surfaces. I looked back at the jewelry ...
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Monster
Second attempt at posting- review? Black, elegant curls bounced on Karen’s shoulders as she walked away from the woman kneeling on the cold tile floor with her head in her ...
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Zombies are among us
Piper’s eyes rolled up into the back of her head as her head bounced off the pavement with a sickening crack. The man, young, fresh, and covered in blood, was ...
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A planet called Earth.
This is a very short introduction I am working on, and hoping to expand on. It's been a while since I've written anything, and I'd like to know what you ...
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Something in my closet
**** I realized that the last stanza of my poem was really.. not flowy.. so I decided to change it and hopefully make some corrections overall. Thanks for all the ...
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Say My Name
It's almost kind of funny, The way you say my name.You say it loud and proud,As if I'm something you can tame.You like the way I purr, And the arch ...
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Will you be mine?
Been in the mood the mood to write lately, so this issomething really short I decided to write. ^_^ Hope it's decent!! Walking down the street is hard. You walk ...
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The Life of a Coat.
The rest of my existence is doomed to be spent in a small, dark, crowded place. I've grown old and ugly, useless. I am surpassed by those younger and sweet ...
