Nikki17

thanks guys ! I'm working on a second, (much longer) piece to go along with this.I will definitely try to remember all you've said. :)

It's supposed to be from a nine-year old's point of view. An intelligent, well-read nine year old, but still, only a nine year old. So, please understand that the vocabulary ...

wow. More reading..I suggest. And editing and more interest and detail. You're topic is pretty interesting, it's a neat subject. But the way you describe it is... umm..not exactly top ...

thanks koko. I ahve some more work if you'd like to read it called 15 money making ideas and in non-fic. I only have "1 money making idea" so far ...

a few minor changes have been made. I am asuming this will take a few re-writes before it gets to a point where I'm satisfied. (Yes, I KNOW I have ...

thx beaverpop but I really don't need all the praise. YWS is for critiques. It makes me happy that you like it but try to focus more on the mistakes. ...

thank you! Nikki

For people reading this and thinking "Why on earth are there so many errors?" I didn't realy understand how to edit and spellcheck my own work so I ended up ...

thank you! I'm really new to this and have very bad typing skills. So any help is appreciated. P.S. I wrote something in non-fic called A guide to snow shoveling ...

whoops! Sorry about the double post! I submitted it but then went back to preview it a second later..I think I might ahve submitted it again. Sorry! AT least now ...

Thank you very much! I know my writing really sloppy but I wrote something a little better in non-fic called a guide to snowshoveling. Wanna help me edit and improve ...

But you're really good! Wanna read my short...thing?( I wouldn't exactly call it a story, mroe like a guide) It's a few paragraphs long and in non-fic called A guide ...

ok, thanks! I'm really not very good at this and just learning so I don't really have much idea of what's going on. I'll write a new version in a ...

oh..I apoligize for the title being the unproper f princess. I had changed it from fairy princess to princess rather quickly. Yes I know there are many typos and spelling ...

reading it over...maybe actually too mcuh detail. It focuses the reader's detail on the descriptions and confuses them.. so they don't exactly know what is going on for parts.