Nike

its nice, i love thrillers. you had many eroors but the writers above explained them all. I hope you continue writting! i liked it alot, im an American so some ...

i can't wait for the next chapter! it was good! just be more descriptive and re-read your post before you post it! Because you said that her first period was ...

nice, i like it! its very interesting. But be more descriptive'cause i have no idea what the place looks like or how the people even look like! But all in ...

nice. I loved it! just slow down a bit, the pace is so fast . and show some more emotion in your characters. sometimes I couldn't tell who's saying so ...

Nice. Really nice. But I have to be a bit picky here. Remember to re-read you r piece BEFORE submitting it! You had many errors as in the past tense-present ...

I decided "If I read the 1st chapter, why don't I go on to the next?!" And this is a good peice. But I ,again, agree with Tanya. MC: What ...

this is a nice piece. I am not gonna say that you should change the whole idea. I agree with the corections Tanya told you to do. But all in ...

Hi I'm Nike! I'm here to review your story today! Okay, I like it alot, but you have made some spelling and grammer errors. What didn't atract to me was ...

It's nice. Just I have a few pointers. 1.) Describe the area the story takes place. 2.) We don't know the MC age at all, or even what year/centiery this ...

I hope you make a continuation! I loved this sooo much! But I thought that you were going a bit fast at some parts like "She gave up after the ...

Hi, pshhxhoney! I loved this! There are some editing to be made. You should take the story down a bit slower, it's just so fast (I had the same deal ...

I love this story! It never happens, but i hope it does! It brought me the feeling i love. But here are some things that should be edited. Remember to ...

this is a great story, i'm not a huge fan of the royal life, so it surprises me that i enjoyed this. You are great at this. Th edits should ...

it was interesting but too short to review! you should type more 'cause you're good. just some grammer and spelling, what the writer's above me said. Watch what you are ...

this was nice, really nice. but it sounds really sad too. I agree with the writer above me (sorry i forgit your name!) you should edit what the writer told ...