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Hi! I liked the story, but where's the romance? If you're continuing, than okay... we'll wait for the romance! Keep Writing! Nike :) P.S.- Tell me when you add moe ...

Hi. I never really ever read Romeo & Juliette but I plan too. I think that this is beautifully written, great discription... but there's ALWAYS a But: I hate the ...

Hi! Oh my gosh, this is amazing...and heartbreaking :( . God, I love the way you wrote it, it's beautiful. Keep Writing! Nike :) P.S.- If You Write More, PM ...

Hilo (hi and Hello combined)! Let's see here... I don't do Poems... sorry. But, for your sake, I'll see what I can do! I like the whole thing, but, it ...

HI! I'm back, you missed me aye? Haha, I laugh at my own jokes too much *phew*. Now, I liked this piece. No edits needed whatsoever. This is a very ...

Hello! You ask and you receive! It took me a while because I was really busy, sorry. But I'm here to review! Finally, right? Comments/suggestions Spellin Errors/Fixes [enter] " Forever." ...

I. LOVE. THIS. It's just so realistic. And the description blows me away. This is written so beuatifully. But, be sure to re-read this because you have many mistakes (spelling). ...

Hello and Welcome to YWS! I'm Nike, PM me aytime wth anything. So, your story is great, but I'm lost. What's going on exactly? Did she just run away from ...

Geat Job. I really am not interested in Planes and such, but this got me hooked. You kinda switch tenses here, watch out. Don't do that! Too short really for ...

Oh my, this is beautifully written. The description is perfect. Everything is great, but when she's in the airport (that's what the airplane station is really called) you should describe ...

Hiya! I'm Nike, here to review this lovely piece. I gotta get off soon though, so I'll speed thingsup. 1.) Love the idea 2.) I agree with the writers above ...

Tell you the truth, I do not like this. Great Idea --but no plot. Have you ever thought of PLOT and MORE DESCRIPTION? You've got to do that. This is ...

Hi! I'm here for just a second cause I gotta run. But, I love the idea. The beggining I don't like. I don't know who's he or she and the ...

Hi! I'm Nike! Good I've got some time to review this lovely piece. Chapter 1: The dream “Hello there.” said a voice that sounded sweet and gentle. “Oh, Hello” the ...

Hi! I'm Nike. I hate repeating things so all I'll say is: I agree with the wirters above me. You had many grammer and spelling mistakes so you should edit ...