Nightshade27

I love this poem, it has a very powerful message. Just a few comments, the punctuation needs to be edited to help the flow of the poem and some grammar ...

I knew at least one Percy Jackson fan would comment about the name! But thank you for the review your words mean a lot to me.

I love this poem because it reflects real life and real emotion. It reminds me of so many people that I see every day. This poem seems very personal to ...

Wow thank you! I wasn't expecting such positive feedback, especially for one of my first poems.

Michelle here to review, In all honesty your work is stunning. It shows raw emotion and is (in my opinion) a perfect embodiment of human emotion. You did a great ...