Nightmare

Very deep and an exelent piece. My only problem is that i felt it was too short . Maybe try and extend it next time to make it two paragraphs ...

Very deep and emotional. I especially liked the message it was sending. I had a minor problem with the vocabulary you used in the second verse. Instead of "inside my ...

Nice parody. I could imagine the song vividly and it feels like it fits. That's the good part about good parodies. I tried one once... Who Let The Writers Out ...

So-so you think? I think it's a bit better than that. I only two problems with it. One, you really need to capitalize the first letters of the verses. That's ...

It's really hard to understand this poem. All it felt like you were doing is stating a sentence and then adding blue at the end. It didn't have a plot ...

Very mysterious. It leaves the reader feeling suspense, like every good horror story should. I also liked your descriptive language. I only had one minor problem and it kinda bugged ...

Hmm... Very intriguing. Almost like mythology. It's hard to make every line ryme, believe me, I've tried. Well done. But, I kinda did have a hard time figuring out what ...

Wow, very deep. I like how you used advanced vocabulary such as gluttony and distant kin. I don't see a lot of that here. And also the fact that you ...

Hi! Nice to meet you! My only problem with your story is that it didn't really have a satisfying ending. I felt like you could've added more to it. I ...