NightWriter

Told you I'd be the first :) This last paragraph +1 was like...phenomenal. Lyla’s face twisted into a look of horror as she feel to her knees, hands shaking as ...

To be honest, AquaMarine has said it all :) But just to let you know, yes it is a cute story. A little romance, you know. And this line here? ...

like a stupid shopaholic?! Is a good repitition, as it is also alliteration. I can't say I agree with your theme, at all , but then, that's cause I'm a ...

This is an interesting analysis. You actually have a really unique touch upon it; one that explores it deeply. I've never thought about these movies in this way until now. ...

Hey UpandOut15, Yes. Let's be honest. It is a short chapter. A very short chapter. Short chapters, aren't totally shunned, though. Actually, I've come across many books that have irregular ...

I agree with Tgirly, that a couple synonyms would make a world of difference and improve your writing style so much. I have been known to be guilty of having ...

I read it, kind of thought about what I was going to say, looked down and Spinelli had already said it. I take my hat off to you both. There ...

Wow. I read this, re-read it and then just kind of looked at it for a bit. I'm in shock, I think. I can't believe you fit so much talent ...

Hey Dogs, This is totally a sympathy review, since you haven't had many ;) Haha - just kidding. Before I start, let me just aware you of one thing: (I'm ...

Hey TinyDancer, That poem was beautiful. Really, honestly, beautiful. It's so soft, and full of honesty. I love the story it tells, I love the fact that he's waiting for ...

That was incredible. Like, wow, SO incredible! Everything about that poem is perfect. Like, the emotive writing, the flow, everything. I love how it ends so simply, so acceptingly, "I ...

Adriana, What I really found special in your writer's voice, is the way you can constantly keep a balance with the dialogue and descriptive writing. The last sentence is always ...

Hey Thewritersdream, This piece is really, quite honestly something to be proud of. I enjoyed it, even though I haven't read the previous chapters. A few things I could point ...

Hey Mikko, That's a cute poem. Emotive, deceptive, and quite clearly sad. It made me almost cry there. Stanzas that mention things like, "As she hugged them with her little ...

You know Michaeld, I love the way you write. It's very different to most poetry. It's short, brisk, heartfelt and kind of quirky. I love the emotive words you use, ...