NightScape

I like it, I really do. It's something I often ponder myself. I have a slightly bad eye that I can't see well through and although I cannot compare it ...

The fact that it was titled frigid is what attracted me. Also because frigidity is looked down upon society, well at least in my experience. Wait, the main character is ...

Hmmmmm to me it seems like someone who woke up from the appearances of the world. (Well maybe I think that because sometimes my poems are based like that but ...

No, I don't have a problem with you at all :) In truth I really love your poem because it's sort of in the same structure that I write, most ...

Some of the words seem a little out of place, but that has been mentioned in previous reviews. Also, it seems to be a little unbalanced. As in I feel ...

Wow...I have never read poetry written in this way before. I only have the ability to write poetry that rhymes. I haven't really ventured into non - rhyming poetry, though ...

If I was a more emotional person, then it would've definitely made me weep. I think it's great that you kept it short and simple, that's part of what made ...