Nicolette

I liked this, especially how it turned morbid toward the end. You're use of old English gives a good sense of time to and beat to the piece as well. ...

I thought this was a generally good poem, better than average, so I don't have *that* much crit, yet I did see somethings that kind of bothered me: In the ...

My world has curled around you smoke against wood, twisting to fit in a place so apart from my own. My mind has concluded and disproved again and again that ...

Of course, not all poetry rhymes. As for this poem, I just feel like it's describing the obvious; I don't think it really delves into something really deep. When you ...

The title drew me in, honestly. Critique time~!: From the bay view, in window form, yesterday I saw an electricity storm. As the rain beat down, it beat down warm. ...

I have a feeling this poem ends with a suicide (am I right?) but I'm not sure what leads to the event. Is she simple tired of the city? I ...

First of all, I love the title for some reason. Really, I'm not sure why, but it has a nice ring to it. Now on the the critique. I'm sure ...

I like the ethreal feeling to this, although I do wish that there were a few more concrete things mentioned to get a better feeling of the atmosphere of this ...

First of all, I just wanted to say that I loooove free verse poetry. I don't think a good poem needs to have rhymes and even meters to be good, ...