Niamh

I don't have anything to correct. This story is very interesting--I haven't yet grasped exactly what it is about, but I can't wait to read more.

Perhaps this revision will make the flashback less foggy.

Thanks for reading again. Yes, I revised it. That is a good idea for the flashback, unfortunately I have tried it, and it still sounds very out of place. This ...

Very disturbing, but nicely written. Everyone has pointed out the errors, so I will just say that it is a great story, even though it creeps me out. Is there ...

I'm a freak about Norse mythology too. My favorite story is that of Hoder and Balder. What about you?

I really did love this. There's nothing that needs to be fixed. I don't know what more praise I can offer--I just think it's brilliant.

I've told you before how much I love Vikings, and I thought this poem was brilliant, because it embodies who Thor was--or who the Norse believed him to be. Don't ...

Revision now posted.

Revision now posted.

I love these; the connection to the simplicities of nature makes them beautiful. Haiku is definitely my favorite form of poetry.

Thanks for your comments! That's a good suggestion about adding an explanation of Irish history, but adding introductions usually gets me in trouble, lol, because I like to ramble on ...

The revision is now posted.

Thank you for your comment. I think your suggestions sound a lot better than what I had originally written. When I wrote this it was intended as a bit of ...

Thanks so much!

That's funny. I love random history facts.