Maybe you could close with a repeated line or something.
I'm really bad at describing poetry techniques, but I don't get enough "feel" with that last line. There was a trace of atmosphere that I get that at that time you were innocent, but it's just...leaving me with the idea that I need more.
I'm sorry I can't think of something right now and it's bugging me, but I'll try to think of how to explain it. o_O
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