Neverland

Thank you for the review! |Peter Pan|

Thank you for the review! I understand what you mean. In the beginning, these were two separate works for two separate school writing assignments. The first three paragraphs was for ...

One thing I'd like to say is, I think you got it backwards. The Sister of Darkness is the one who ends up with her love, and Sister Light is ...

I included the meadow part to create parallel structure between the real world and her dream world. For example, the sun is the candle, the path is the staircase, the ...

Hello, I have found one punctuation error but no capitalization errors. I also italicized the onomatopoeia. Thank you for the feedback! | Peter Pan |

I was summoned by the fabulous title. ^^" | Peter Pan |

Thank you for the review! | Peter Pan |

Oh, alright. I was just a bit confused on whether or not I was missing out on a holiday or something. Thanks for clarifying. | Peter Pan |

Thank you for the kind words. May I ask, why a four-leaf clover? | Peter Pan |

Omg, I'm so sorry, I sent the same message twice. This isn't the first time that happened today. My apologies. >.

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Hello! This is a wonderful poem. I especially liked the first 4 lines because the rhythm and rhyme was consistent and beautiful. On the 5th line, instead of saying "When ...

I'm sorry, I sent the same review twice on accident. >.>

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Hello! To begin, in the 1st phrase, I believe "Garden of Eden" needs to be capitalized because it is a reference to the bible. The 2nd phrase does not make ...

Thank you so much for the review! It makes me really happy that people are actually reading this. :) | Peter Pan |

Thank you for the review! I believe the word that you're looking for is "rhyme scheme". I tried to follow an abcb rhyme scheme in this work, but there was ...