NeverNeverLandGirl

This took a really pleasant turn at the end!

Here for a review. What a cute little poem to start off the new year. I like it and the way that it captures the excitement and celebratory of the ...

Here for a review. Your poem reminded me of Michael Lee's poem, Pass On. And I love that poem. I loved your style of using the one, two, and three ...

Here with a review. I love the imagery that you have created here and you brought it all to life as if I was there and hearing all of these ...

HolographicLadyBug. What a name!(: I really liked the way that you took something so simple and tore it apart. You didn't see the moon, but you saw the way it ...

Review: First thing I would like to say about your poem that really hooked me into it was you describing your old self as if she were another person and ...

Ooo, I loved the ending. It's strong and it gives everyone a kick and I love that. You also created great imagery with the 'venomous fluid' and 'sworn with guilt.' ...