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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Fantasy Re: Dig Up Her Bones

    I really like this poem but it seems a little dark you know. The story gives me goosebumps when it progresses. This sounds like something which would have happened in ...

    Jul 13, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 5} Chapter 12

    From the first crackling moment when Lt. Briar steps into the clearing as a full-fledged dragon knight, the tension crackles sharper than a dragon’s breath on dry tinder. The transformation ...

    Jul 11, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Literature Re: The Veil of Unknowing- The Ghost, The Fractured After, and Chapter 1

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    Reading your story is like stepping into a dense, misty forest where the air is thick with mystery and something almost otherworldly lingers just beyond sight. From the very first ...

    Jul 11, 2025
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Arachne’s story-The adventures of Poppy McLain

    Your story totally pulls me in right from the start. Arachne is this perfect mix of vulnerable and strong, someone you want to root for immediately. I love how you ...

    Jul 11, 2025
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Many more five Richardson stories

    This “Town of Richardson” collection is a haunting and bittersweet blend of youthful hopes tangled with the shadows of loss and ghosts—both literal and emotional. I love how each story ...

    Jul 11, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Fantasy Re: Dig Up Her Bones

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    Love the dark vibe and rhythm here—this ghostly tale has a raw, almost Shakespearean energy with a modern bite. The voice is vivid, and I can feel the narrator’s bitterness ...

    Jul 11, 2025
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Ava Luxrose’s story-Zombies of Mariesville

    From the very start, your story plants the reader inside the elegant, rose-covered mansion where Ava Luxrose lives—a place that at first glance promises comfort and beauty, but soon reveals ...

    Jul 11, 2025
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Gehenna’s origin: Cemetery angels 🫀🕷️

    Hey! I just finished reading your story about Gehenna and Taliyah, and honestly, it stuck with me. The whole vibe of starry nights filled with these creepy Starlit Angels is ...

    Jul 11, 2025
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Character Design - Alex

    Your story is a compelling, heart-wrenching journey that deftly explores the complex intersections of illness, isolation, hope, and resilience in a world ravaged by a viral apocalypse. It is a ...

    Jul 11, 2025
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Kaida’s story-The adventures of Poppy McLain

    Your story about Kaida, the Dragon Warrior, unfolds like a radiant tapestry woven from threads of mythology, heroism, and poignant tragedy, a true gem in the landscape of fantasy storytelling. ...

    Jul 11, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: before bones, we were waves once

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    This poem is a river that doesn’t ask for permission before it pulls you in. It doesn’t splash or scream—it just sweeps you quietly and completely into its undercurrent, one ...

    Jul 11, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: The walk to school!

    Oh man, this one was quiet, but it hit loud. There's something so deeply tender and aching about this little scene—just two brothers walking to school in the pink hush ...

    Jul 11, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: It appears that the parents have arrived

    Okay, so I’m going to be honest with you here, because this piece was completely bananas—in the best possible, horror-on-acid way. It’s like someone dumped a teenage diary into a ...

    Jul 11, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Back to school…Kyle?

    Oh wow, this was such a soft, sweet piece of writing. It felt like standing in the back of that lunch line myself, awkward and full of nervous hope, waiting ...

    Jul 11, 2025
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Veil of the Unclaimed - Somewhere Only I Know

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    This poem feels like a soft rebellion against reality—a tender retreat into a dream-world stitched together with fragments of comfort, longing, and quiet joy. The opening lines draw us straight ...

    Jul 10, 2025


You flare, you flicker, you fade... And in the end, all your tomorrows become yesterdays.
— Megatron (Lost Light, by Roberts, Lawrence, Lafuente)