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This work definitely sounds ominous and intriguing! The language and wording gives the piece the same feeling of purpose we see in the boy, Tom. I only have two discrepancies, ...

First of all, this is a fantastic piece, the action is strange and piqued my interest enough to keep reading! Here are some things that I picked out: It was ...

Well this was certainly different! I'm not sure why but I definitely got a King Arthur and the Round Table type feel while reading this story, especially with the mention ...

Hello! It's your friendly neighbourhood Nerd Bird here for a review! This is weird but a good weird! I really like the idea of some sort of 'intelligent' awakening within ...

You had me at dying star. For some reason I absolutely loved this, despite the 'jumbled words' you can easily read the passion behind them. For the shattering of something ...

Hi there! You're friendly neighborhood Nerd Bird here for a review! Firstly I'll just point out, if you are hoping for further reviews, you're definitely going to have to find ...

Hi there! Your friendly neighborhood NerdBird here for a review! Unfortunately, I must agree with Squall on this one. All action and no back story makes for a dull piece(bizarely) ...

Hey there! Your friendly neighborhood NerdBird here for a review! This was a really interesting and captivating piece! Certainly different, and I cant get the thought of those crows out ...

This is brilliant :D Are you sure we can't all actually play/sing/record this? :') I think this could be a start of a collection :) I demand one for each ...

Hi there! Your friendly neighborhood NerdBird here for a review! First thing I notice is the duplicate first paragraph, but this can be edited easily :D Re-focus a little between ...

Hey there! Your friendly neighborhood NerdBird here for a review! This was perfect in my opinion! as TheWriter13 has said, it reads very much like some sort of death chant ...

Hi there! Your friendly neighborhood Nerd Bird here for a review! The emotion in this piece if very well written, despite not having read a previous chapter or prologue. You ...

Hi there! Your friendly neighborhood NerdBird here for a review! :D Loving the continuation of this :D Your really into your characters sense of mind(as you told me!) and I ...

Hi there! Your friendly neighborhood NerdBird here for a review! I'll admit the more and more I read your chapters, the more engrossed I get! Admittedly at the first and ...

Hi there! Your friendly neighborhood NerdBird here for a review! Firstly, wow, I was completely absorbed by this. It used elements from lots of current themes but twisted them to ...