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Ah! That makes sense, it's a metaphor. It was just a tad confusing when you're also saying that it's creepy, plus there's the zombie guy.

Thanks for the review! As for the people's names, I didn't tell you on purpose. This is the prologue, and you're not supposed to know who they are yet.

You missed a couple punctuation parts, but it's really good! I like it even better than before!

Okay. %uD83D%uDE00

Thanks for the review! The reason she went with them is because, well, what else were they going to do with her? Leave her there?

Ah, yes. It does change formatting. When I move my chapters over from google docs, I have to go over again and add italics to everybody's thoughts again.

In america we just say "we're moving tomorrow" we dont day "house" and when we do, it's "we're moving to a new house"

Oh. Okay. Well, not in America. At least, not where I live.

Yeah, that's what I was expecting to happen, I was just saying that if it doesn't, (Because you can never be sure) I'll be left really unsatisfied.

Okay, that makes sense.

Thanks for the review! And no, I haven't edited my previous chapters, because I'm going to completely finish the story first, and then go back and write the second draft ...

Thanks for the review!

I guess it just depends on how you read it.

Yes, I'm from America. I think what made it seem teenagery to me was the period, which made me imagine him saying it a certain teenagery whiny way. All you ...