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Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review!

Yes it was helpful, thanks!

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"In his room" Do you mean his office, or his bedroom? Both would be back in Chicago, not Sioux Falls, which is where the warehouse they are protecting is located. ...

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Hmm, I'd probably know what was going on more if I had read the previous chapters. In any case however, this was quite interesting, and I'm feeling rather inclined to ...

Thanks for the review!

Yes, it does sort of start out as a normal teenager story if you don't read the prologue. Also, "handsomest" is a word. Thanks for the review!

You don't have to give me a summary; I like reading!

Thanks for the review! Actually, I'm changing the end a little bit. I realized that having the teenager being able to read minds would mess up my plot later on, ...

I don't particularly like romance, but this was really well done, very emotional. Also, the title was really good. I can never think of good titles for my literature, but ...