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Overall impression: it's tight, it's coiled, it leaves us feeling on the 'edge'. There is great sense of tension and a feeling of being wound-up in this, even in the ...

Just to let you know, most people find writing poems about writing poems annoying to read, just like they find hearing a speech about speeches annoying - because they're done ...

Heya Anshita - just building upon what the other two said - the concept of love IS timeless, so I feel that you should have the freedom to explore it ...

Hi Lola (I mean, you did say I could call you that in your username)! Okay, looks like I'm the second reviewer - but no worries there - I'm not ...

You know what my favourite line in that whole text was? To be continued… I can't WAIT - in fact, I can almost feel a NOVEL coming on (no pressure). ...

First off, just like to mention that I don't usually review this kind of thing, but since it was just sitting there, looking so absolutely HILARIOUS, I had to give ...

Well, this certainly made me laugh - I was just briefly going through the forums and simply HAD to read something with a title like that. I understand that you ...

It hooks me as soon as I read the first line. The intensity, the drama, the mystery is heightened by the use of 'you.' HOwever, the beginning would benefit from ...

The poem is small and sweet, with little bite-sized stanzas - much like a butterfly itself. However, that means that you've got to phrase everything in such a way that ...

Hey fizza! It turns out I was just reading something else on the topic of 'identity' and something about this hedgehog poem got to me. Peel back some spikes, some ...

Hi - I'm not going to be nit-picky about commas and such, since to me they matter less than what you've actually written. From the outset, I really love this ...

I like a good mystery...let me guess - at first, you're talking about a ship, right? Or a boat of some sort? I assume that because you say you'll tether ...

First thing that goes through my mind when reading this is that it is primarily made up of short, literal sentences, and little or no imagery. You have clearly got ...

As a poem, I definitely enjoyed it - it seemed quite spaced out for a poem, but that's alright. You use some amazing imagery - 'silhouette mocking daybreaks,' 'watching lightmold ...

This story - may I call it that? a recount is a better word, I think - is told very entertainingly indeed. I was hooked when I started to read ...