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Re: The Shadow
I love it when writers try something different...this has certainly got me thinking, actually. Poetry is meant to be timeless, but it is also meant to be concreted down with ...
Jun 5, 2010 -
Re: 'Tonic for Silence'
There is something very interesting about the way you write, and I think it's the casual nature of the imagery, the nonchalance with which you place the metaphors and symbols ...
Jun 5, 2010 -
Re: Death's Riddle
I love a good laugh, and this certainly provided it. I guess this is meant to be a humorous piece, then, which is why I reckon it's okay to be ...
Jun 4, 2010 -
Re: an esquisse of the sun
So, I meant to review this some time ago. We're going on a bit of a 'sun' theme, by the looks of your latest works - or their titles, at ...
Jun 4, 2010 -
Re: The Clown
I generally find I only bother to continue reading a piece if the first line grabs me, if it hints at a mystery, seeming to give away everything while giving ...
Jun 3, 2010 -
Re: A Lovely Response
Hmph. this wasn’t addressed to you, but to my thumb Fine. I take it the 'you' is (mostly) addressing the thumb, then? My treasure, I found you right there on ...
Jun 3, 2010 -
Re: the five senses of sight
This was a seamless poem. What I loved about it was the tumbling imagery, the overflow of language and words, the freedom of lines unhindered by a lack of commas, ...
Jun 3, 2010 -
Re: A Lovely Suprise
What. Are. You. Doing ? And we think that if I showed you the fun. It wouldn’t be fun ~ anymore. Do you understand now darling? And now - I ...
Jun 2, 2010 -
Re: Finis. Exit.
So, I'm a couple of days late, but I knew I couldn't resist reading this all the same. And - what difference does it make when this is read? A ...
Jun 1, 2010 -
Re: The WORSE four letter word.
Oh my God!!! I was right! (As in: I am 99% certain I know what the word is :D). But first, I want to say I enjoyed this. It's sharp, ...
May 29, 2010 -
Re: Soneto
So, I thought I'd give my two cents worth here. I like Spanish, I understand it - it's a beautiful language. I would love to be able to read poetry ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: This is no longer a poem
When I read a poem, I view the world in the way the poet views the world. In which case, the following line only adds to the rest of the ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Poets are
Oh Kamas - you said it perfectly yourself! Irony - and here I was, reading the poem, thinking how unbelievable ironic it is that your POEM has a POINT which ...
May 25, 2010 -
Re: This is a spring morning
This was cute - cute in terms of its size, cute in terms of the images themselves, cute in the way you described those images. However, at times I felt ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: naivete; shame; love (or the ribbon thief)
Why did she steal the ribbon? Or rather - why might anyone do things without thought, without a care because of a 'rejection slip come the day before'? :P This ...
May 24, 2010
