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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Shadow

    I love it when writers try something different...this has certainly got me thinking, actually. Poetry is meant to be timeless, but it is also meant to be concreted down with ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: 'Tonic for Silence'

    There is something very interesting about the way you write, and I think it's the casual nature of the imagery, the nonchalance with which you place the metaphors and symbols ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Death's Riddle

    I love a good laugh, and this certainly provided it. I guess this is meant to be a humorous piece, then, which is why I reckon it's okay to be ...

    Jun 4, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: an esquisse of the sun

    So, I meant to review this some time ago. We're going on a bit of a 'sun' theme, by the looks of your latest works - or their titles, at ...

    Jun 4, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Clown

    I generally find I only bother to continue reading a piece if the first line grabs me, if it hints at a mystery, seeming to give away everything while giving ...

    Jun 3, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Lovely Response

    Hmph. this wasn’t addressed to you, but to my thumb Fine. I take it the 'you' is (mostly) addressing the thumb, then? My treasure, I found you right there on ...

    Jun 3, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: the five senses of sight

    This was a seamless poem. What I loved about it was the tumbling imagery, the overflow of language and words, the freedom of lines unhindered by a lack of commas, ...

    Jun 3, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Lovely Suprise

    What. Are. You. Doing ? And we think that if I showed you the fun. It wouldn’t be fun ~ anymore. Do you understand now darling? And now - I ...

    Jun 2, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Finis. Exit.

    So, I'm a couple of days late, but I knew I couldn't resist reading this all the same. And - what difference does it make when this is read? A ...

    Jun 1, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The WORSE four letter word.

    Oh my God!!! I was right! (As in: I am 99% certain I know what the word is :D). But first, I want to say I enjoyed this. It's sharp, ...

    May 29, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Soneto

    So, I thought I'd give my two cents worth here. I like Spanish, I understand it - it's a beautiful language. I would love to be able to read poetry ...

    May 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: This is no longer a poem

    When I read a poem, I view the world in the way the poet views the world. In which case, the following line only adds to the rest of the ...

    May 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Poets are

    Oh Kamas - you said it perfectly yourself! Irony - and here I was, reading the poem, thinking how unbelievable ironic it is that your POEM has a POINT which ...

    May 25, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: This is a spring morning

    This was cute - cute in terms of its size, cute in terms of the images themselves, cute in the way you described those images. However, at times I felt ...

    May 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: naivete; shame; love (or the ribbon thief)

    Why did she steal the ribbon? Or rather - why might anyone do things without thought, without a care because of a 'rejection slip come the day before'? :P This ...

    May 24, 2010


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