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Hey River! Welcome to YWS! So...this was a sweet analogy (pardon the pun). It was short, like a mug of hot chocolate, devoured easily in one sitting. It's interesting that ...

So...what may I call you, x3CoFx3? ^^ I enjoyed this. I loved the sharp intensity of the poem, the focus, the tension that strung this poem together from start to ...

Oh, won't you? ^^ But you are; right here you are, and that's the wonderful irony of it. :D To get the point across, it's what you have to do. ...

Hey! I wouldn't say it was hard to figure out at all! (On the same note, it wasn't easy, either, which meant that it was neither frustratingly vague and nor ...

Ooooh, I love it when writers try something new! As far as the poetry goes, were I to read it all in one go, or maybe even in stanzas, there ...

Argh...I read Of Mice and Men about four times, and hated every word of it. I'm sad to say my teacher wasn't the greatest appreciator of Steinback - I would ...

For all those who don't like Twilight...try reading Count Dracula - the Count Dracula in all its glory. I, well, I tried reading it, I honestly did. (but it was ...

You attract long reviews, I'm afraid. I'm also pushed for time, so only have read the piece, and not any reviews, so forgive me in advance if I repeat anything ...

Oooooh, a fellow New Zealander! Kia Ora, Lily :D Most of what I wanted to say has been well-covered by the others, so be good to take their advice into ...

Holy moly. That was scary , not in the sense that it was frightening, but in the sense that you've got complete control over the plot while the reader has ...

*gasps* Why have I only just found this? carnival Only one thing really struck me as amazingly different about this (other than the magical vocabulary of yours) - I imagine ...

No, no, no , Kamas - this is not a 'hopeless case'. Or, if it is, you are putting my poetry to shame. I wouldn't say you're in a writing ...

Do you always write 'short' stories that deserve to be novels? That I would order be novels, had I that power? So...this was tight. Tense, on an edge. Much like ...

I love learning things from poetry. This one sent me on a wild goose chase across the net (not so wild, ha), searching for the meaning of 'coelacanth.' I have ...

It's funny, but this is the second poem today that's really got me thinking about the nature of poetry itself. I reckon poetry has become very 'read-in-one's-own-head' actually, meaning that ...