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Very Edgar Allen Poe like :) You definitely give the reader a sense of the character's fear, but never quite an understanding of it. First, he seemed to quick to ...

There's a lot of depth to be found here; it could be viewed as a commentary on the nature of cities and it could also be viewed as a piece ...

I thought it was great! I love post-apocylytpic stories like this, and it really held my attention all the way through, which unfortunately most post-apocylyptic stories don't do. The way ...

My favorite line is "Like a lovers sweet sweat," It's just kinda neat to say. The poem right now sounds broken in parts. For instance, the first three lines in ...

What I didn't like: - Some of the analogies seemed kinda corny, like "basking him in a halo-like glow that any angel would be proud of," and also, try not ...

The way you open the story is excellent; there was so much visual imagery, and so much reaction from the character that I was able to manifest the scene and ...

I really, really liked this. It was awesome how you moved the story forward through a variety of mediums (letters, e-mails, ims, narrative) and there was real emotion behind it. ...

Wow... I can't go into as much detail as ZZAP, but what he said sounds good. Anyways, I liked it. It accomplished everything a first paragraph should do (held my ...

I reall like it so far. Of course, it does end rather abruptly, but you are going to add more to it. The imagery involved needs a little more fleshing ...

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If this is real, then kudos for posting it. But if it's fake, then this is absolutely awesome. You really captured the emotions, and I could manifest these characters in ...