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This is a really awesome poem, I love the imagery here. You've got a great penchant for repetition, rhythm and rhyme and it's largely consistent. Smaller pastures, smaller fields/ Taller ...

I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, mainly because of the incredibly tense bargaining scene with Seth and this great new character. It seemed very Tarantino-esque; two characters are facing off, and ...

Hey, so I said I was gonna review Chapter Three first to bump it up, but I especially enjoyed this chapter and I thought I'd say a few things before ...

Hey, so I thoroughly enjoyed this piece here. Firstly, you described the car crash very well; the casualties and repercussions of said incident were worded very well, and incredibly realistically. ...

It's got to be The Dark Knight for me. Heath Ledger was such a beautiful Joker, and it was everything Bat-fans wanted out of a Batman movie. I have a ...

Hey there! I've already told you how great I found this; you've put a lot of humour into it, which is appreciated in a short story about Hell, and I ...

This was such a great poem; proof that you don't always need a rhyme scheme in poetry. The ideas and imagery you used were fantastic, and the whole thing flowed ...

I'm really sad that this isn't longer. It was a pretty nifty tribute to some classic fiction, and the first verse was especially beautiful. Loving the subtle repetition and the ...

Hey there! This was really enjoyable with some great ideas, but I think it could benefit from a bit of editing. First of all, the chat sections were a little ...

This was really enjoyable, if a bit depressing! The whole poem has an immense feeling of loneliness that came across incredibly well- you have a good hand for empathy and ...

This was great, ideas within the lyrics were wonderful, with a sadness that spoke to me and a comfort that outlined the whole piece, reassuring and kind. I'm glad you ...

Hey there! First of all, the best thing about this piece is the description. Really, really well done there. Every sentence seemed to be so beautifully crafted and thought out; ...

Quite a beautiful piece actually; the way you create imagery within your writing is quite superb. The whole mare thing is really clever, I love how you've made her somewhat ...

This was great, my personal favourite parts being the list of "baddies" your character, presumably the Devil, is friends with (Sideshow Bob is pretty much my favourite Simpsons character) and ...

This is awesome, but I feel it should have been longer- if there's a Chapter One, Part Two they should have really been combined to make it feel more satisfying. ...