Mystique

Hey thanks a lot! :) And I know that the watching part may seem strange but I was actually trying to convey an image of literally being able to watch ...

Thank you! That makes sense. I made some edits.

Oh no no you are quite right!! Keeping it short is one thing but being vague is another. I'm glad you pointed that out!! :)

I'm glad you liked it, thank you for the review :D

Yeah, thank you so much :D I didn't add too many descriptions because I wanted to keep it short but yeah, I'll look into that!!

Thank you :D

Thank you so much for the suggestions!! I quite agree but it's really difficult to change small parts in the poem after it is written. I'll try my best and ...

Thanks, its how my thoughts just pour out. Your reviews are what keep me going. :D

Thank you so much for you review!! It means a lot and i understand whatever you pointed out but you know... once i write something, changing a little part would ...

woah!! thank you so much, I need the help :D :D I'll go about correcting this

Yeah, I'll work on the emotions part... I have noticed it too. I wanted to keep the beginning a little mysterious, so i kept it like that but I'll think ...

yeah that sounds better!! :D

thank you! :D "alone is what i have, alone protects me" is actually a quote from BBC Sherlock, i've started agreeing with it. -hugs back- :D

yeah! i do that often, my friend calls it plagiarism :P

:D :D