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Re: Daughter of a Veteran.
Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! I'll definitely take your suggestions into account :D
Wed Sep 11, 2013 7:34 pm -
Re: Daughter of a Veteran.
Haha XD, thank you! I have to say, this is a pretty awesome review :) And actually, about the rhyming, I know that its off. I meant it to be ...
Wed Sep 11, 2013 7:29 pm -
Re: Writer's Block
This is really cute! It's short and sweet, and it totally describes how all writers feel. Nice first work :D
Wed Sep 11, 2013 2:35 am -
Re: Define Love
Haha, this is just too perfect!!! I can't even review this, because I simply have no suggestions to make it better! Great job, just great! :D
Wed Sep 11, 2013 2:34 am -
Re: Broken Bottles
Thank you!!! I'm so glad you liked it!!! I was a little unsure about this story at first, mainly because of how dark it is and all the swearing, but ...
Mon Sep 09, 2013 7:58 pm -
Re: Play
Wow.... honestly, this is stunning. It has so much beauty and truth, and the emotion in it is astounding. I love how you have so many similes, all related to ...
Fri Sep 06, 2013 6:40 pm -
Re: Memoirs of a Snack
Haha XD. I honestly love this so much. It's somehow serious and hilarious at the same time, something that is quite hard to achieve. The vocabulary was great, the voice ...
Fri Sep 06, 2013 6:37 pm -
Re: Once is Never Enough
Thanks for reviewing! I'm so happy you liked it! I honestly can't stop smiling right now :D
Fri Sep 06, 2013 4:27 pm -
Re: Once is Never Enough
Wow, thank you! This honestly just made my day!!!!
Fri Sep 06, 2013 4:24 pm -
Re: Once is Never Enough
Thank you!!! I'm so glad you liked it! I've never really been able to write poetry before, and this is actually the first time that when I attempted it it ...
Fri Sep 06, 2013 3:03 am -
Re: Broken Bottles
Oh, I forgot to answer your question!!! Yeah, I do favorite short stories. I'm like to think of myself as a story teller, and I'm not much of a poem ...
Thu Sep 05, 2013 3:33 am -
Re: Broken Bottles
Thanks so much for the review! As you can probably tell, this isn't like most stories that I usually write, but when I had the idea it was just too ...
Thu Sep 05, 2013 3:04 am -
Re: Broken Bottles
Thank you!!! I'm so glad that you like it! As you already pointed out, all the profanity in it really isn't me. I included it simply because that's what this ...
Thu Sep 05, 2013 3:02 am -
Re: Broken Bottles
Thank you so much for your feedback! It's honestly very helpful. As you can probably tell, everything I wrote about in this piece is very new to me. I come ...
Thu Sep 05, 2013 2:58 am -
Re: You think you want to be a writer? No you don't.
Haha XD. Yeah, I was exaggerating. But that's only because I was trying to make a point, and I tend to do that a lot. But I'm glad you see ...
Wed Sep 04, 2013 5:35 pm
