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MysteryMe

  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Jealousy

    I love this piece. You really have a wonderful writing style! It flows across the page and is just so easy to read. You also write with a lot of ...

    Aug 28, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Colors

    This was a very beautiful piece, and it describes the abstract thoughts of the main character perfectly. I know a lot of people were confused about the whole euthanasia thing, ...

    Aug 28, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Romantic Re: The Death of Love

    This story seems to me to be a classic love story that leads to tragedy. I've seem a lot of those, so I'd suggest trying to make it a little ...

    Aug 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Dramatic Re: Sometimes I wonder.

    I really, really love this poem! It just flowed so smoothly, and the rhyming just felt so perfect and right. That's a hard thing to accomplish, but you made it ...

    Aug 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: Vicky...Not so Icky?

    Nice job! Like I promised, I decided to check this out and I have to say its really well done. Like I said in my other review, you have a ...

    Aug 27, 2013
  • Short Story » Satire, Spiritual Re: Unicorns Exist

    Haha, this is a very interesting piece of fiction. It made me smile. I loved how you took something so silly and childish and wrote about it in a way ...

    Aug 27, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Amy.

    I liked this story a lot. You have a very enjoyable writing style, one that flows along the page and is quite easy to read. So good job with that. ...

    Aug 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, General Re: women and mother earth (ch-1)

    I really enjoyed reading this. It's very true and shows a darker side to humanity, one that includes the horrible treatment of things that we value less than ourselves. Your ...

    Aug 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Neglected

    Great poem! Short, but very meaningful with a strong message. You could really feel the pain and loneliness in the girl's voice. I liked it a lot, but there are ...

    Aug 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I am just a writer

    I have to say, I really quite enjoyed this poem. It had actual meaning, and it's something I could relate to, being a writer myself. I especially loved the line, ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Other Re: It's Blood That Makes Me Sing

    Wow! I have to say, this story definitely fits in the horror category! It was deranged and disturbing, which I assume is exactly what you were going for. So, nice ...

    Aug 25, 2013


The universe will reward you for taking risks on its behalf.
— Shakti Gawain