MysteryMe

I absolutely love this poem!!!! Honestly, it's amazing! It's such a true representation of the self-hatred and inadequacy that woman and young girls these days often feel. I actually could ...

Haha XD. I honestly love this so much. It's somehow serious and hilarious at the same time, something that is quite hard to achieve. The vocabulary was great, the voice ...

Wow.... honestly, this is stunning. It has so much beauty and truth, and the emotion in it is astounding. I love how you have so many similes, all related to ...

Hi there! Welcome to the YWS! I'm 14 too, and I just want to say that whatever seems to be troubling you, you are never alone. We are all very ...

This is a terrible story, and at the same time absolutely beautiful. I just... I can't even begin to tell you how amazing this is. This honestly touched me, and ...

Hey InfiniteSnowfall! I just came by for a little review :D. You've been so kind on so many of my stories, I just thought I'd return the favor! I came ...

Great! I really loved the emotion and truth in this poem. You did a nice job with the flow and the vocabulary, as always, was amazing. What I would suggest ...

Awesome poem! It's extremely deep and emotional, and has almost a soothing affect on the reader. The vocabulary you use is extraordinary, such as "cacophony," "saccharine," and "abyss." I'll admit, ...

Once again, you posted an awesome (and really long!) chapter! I am in awe of your characterization. Your characters just all seem so... real. They all just act extremely natural, ...

This is a very touching poem and I'm very glad to have read it. You really do a wonderful job expressing the emotion, and even with so few words I ...

Seriously, I love this. It was amazing and honestly so true. It captures the mind frame and situation of a pack animal perfectly. I'd love to give you some suggestions ...

Beautiful, I love this! I was hanging onto the edge of my seat the until time, which is part of what makes this such a powerful story. There's no possible ...

Wow, this piece really is striking to me. The story itself is so fascinating, you could be a horrible writer and still make it work. It's thrilling and emotional and ...

Hey Liaya! You've reviewed my past two works, and I kept telling myself to return the favor, but I couldn't find time until now. So, here it is.... Wow, I ...

Great chapter! Even better than you last, I think. The entire thing flows very smoothly, and I found nearly no mistakes in your grammar or spelling. It's very well worded ...