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Re: Let Me Fall
I just want to say, I think the format of your poem is really cool! The sliders make it like a puzzle to be solved, and it was really fun ...
Jun 9, 2014 -
Re: Frozen Fan-Fiction
This is great, Messenger! Nice job, and a really touching conclusion. It's funny... I've actually written a frozen fanfic, too! I mean, mine's not on this website (it has a ...
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: The Blood of the Martyrs- Chapter 2: The Encounter
Hey there, it's MysteryMe, here for a quick review!!! Thanks for the PM, btw. I'm glad to know that you value my opinion :). Hopefully I can help you out ...
Jun 1, 2014 -
Re: The Blood of the Martyrs Chapter 1
Hey there, Jacquesfdutoit!!! It's MysteryMe, here for that review you requested!!! First off, let me just say: nice job. For a first chapter, I think this was the perfect length, ...
May 14, 2014 -
Re: Azazel: Prologue
Hey there! It's MysteryMe, here for a quick review! Let me just say... wow. Honestly, this is a 'wow' kind of prologue. I knew you were a good writer, but ...
May 7, 2014 -
Re: Carnation: The Assassin's Tears - Chapter 1
Hey there!!! It's MysteryMe, here for a quick review! First of all, let me just say nice job! This is a really great, suspenseful mystery novel you have going on ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: Coming out.
Hey there! It's MysteryMe, here for a quick review!!!! I just want to say... wow. This is amazing. I can relate to this personally (on at least a small level) ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: Being a Boy is More Important than Breathing
Hey there, queerelves! It's MysteryMe, here for a short review!! Ok, obviously I can't really say too much about this, considering it's only five lines (reviewing short poems is so ...
Apr 24, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 1 Part 1 - Breakfast at the Inn
Hey there, Messenger! It's MysteryMe, here for a quick review!!! I just want to say: nice job! This chapter was really quite interesting, and I enjoyed learning more about Castor's ...
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: Life Counts
Hi there! It's MysteryMe! Here for a quick (rather pathetic) review! I'm not much of a poem person, so I can't say much about improving this, but I just loved ...
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: Cameron
Hey there! It's MysteryMe, here for a quick review! Okay, so I don't really have much time for a review, so like I said I'm just going to make this ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale - The Prologue
Hi Messenger! MysteryMe again! I don't have much time to give another long review, so I'll make this really quick. I just really wanted to tell you that I love ...
Apr 19, 2014 -
Re: Sign- Prologue
Hey there Pompadour!!! It's MysteryMe, here for a quick review!!! Wow, let me just start off by saying that. This honestly felt like a real, published novel I might find ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale - The Prologue
Hey there, Messenger! It's MysteryMe, here for a quick review!!! Just want to say, this was a great prologue. You supplied a good deal of information (who the characters are, ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Blink.
Hi there! MysteryMe, here for a quick review. I just want to say... wow. This is one of the most touching pieces on YWS that I have ever read, and ...
Mar 29, 2014
