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MysteryMe

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Let Me Fall

    I just want to say, I think the format of your poem is really cool! The sliders make it like a puzzle to be solved, and it was really fun ...

    Jun 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Frozen Fan-Fiction

    This is great, Messenger! Nice job, and a really touching conclusion. It's funny... I've actually written a frozen fanfic, too! I mean, mine's not on this website (it has a ...

    Jun 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Realistic Re: The Blood of the Martyrs- Chapter 2: The Encounter

    Hey there, it's MysteryMe, here for a quick review!!! Thanks for the PM, btw. I'm glad to know that you value my opinion :). Hopefully I can help you out ...

    Jun 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Blood of the Martyrs Chapter 1

    Hey there, Jacquesfdutoit!!! It's MysteryMe, here for that review you requested!!! First off, let me just say: nice job. For a first chapter, I think this was the perfect length, ...

    May 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Other Re: Azazel: Prologue

    Hey there! It's MysteryMe, here for a quick review! Let me just say... wow. Honestly, this is a 'wow' kind of prologue. I knew you were a good writer, but ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Carnation: The Assassin's Tears - Chapter 1

    Hey there!!! It's MysteryMe, here for a quick review! First of all, let me just say nice job! This is a really great, suspenseful mystery novel you have going on ...

    May 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Coming out.

    Hey there! It's MysteryMe, here for a quick review!!!! I just want to say... wow. This is amazing. I can relate to this personally (on at least a small level) ...

    May 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Being a Boy is More Important than Breathing

    Hey there, queerelves! It's MysteryMe, here for a short review!! Ok, obviously I can't really say too much about this, considering it's only five lines (reviewing short poems is so ...

    Apr 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Spiritual Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 1 Part 1 - Breakfast at the Inn

    Hey there, Messenger! It's MysteryMe, here for a quick review!!! I just want to say: nice job! This chapter was really quite interesting, and I enjoyed learning more about Castor's ...

    Apr 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Life Counts

    Hi there! It's MysteryMe! Here for a quick (rather pathetic) review! I'm not much of a poem person, so I can't say much about improving this, but I just loved ...

    Apr 22, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: Cameron

    Hey there! It's MysteryMe, here for a quick review! Okay, so I don't really have much time for a review, so like I said I'm just going to make this ...

    Apr 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Spiritual Re: Castor's Tale - The Prologue

    Hi Messenger! MysteryMe again! I don't have much time to give another long review, so I'll make this really quick. I just really wanted to tell you that I love ...

    Apr 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Sign- Prologue

    Hey there Pompadour!!! It's MysteryMe, here for a quick review!!! Wow, let me just start off by saying that. This honestly felt like a real, published novel I might find ...

    Apr 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Spiritual Re: Castor's Tale - The Prologue

    Hey there, Messenger! It's MysteryMe, here for a quick review!!! Just want to say, this was a great prologue. You supplied a good deal of information (who the characters are, ...

    Apr 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Blink.

    Hi there! MysteryMe, here for a quick review. I just want to say... wow. This is one of the most touching pieces on YWS that I have ever read, and ...

    Mar 29, 2014


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