Mynameswriter

Thanks Wolfare. Basically every question you asked is answered in later chapters so i'm not going to answer them now. The intro paragraph for paragraph 3 i felt it just ...

Thanks so much! I'm not always good at getting little things like that. I actually tried to make it a little unclear in the beginning for the later chapters. I'm ...

Wow. You wow. This was really good. It was all really good and i didn't want it to end. You should keep writing this. If you do please notify me. ...

Okay. Thanks!

The feels bro! The feels!

Okay and thanks! (Btw I've been working on the letter part a lot more.)

Yea i had written this and two other chapters two years ago. I didn't really edit this one at all. I was ten and doing it for a short-story in ...

I'm so stupid sometimes. I hadn't noticed the repeat... If you haven't noticed yet you've probably seen that i can't edit for my life. I fixed everything you said basically. ...

Okay that made everything clearer. Thanks!

Thanks so much! And yea its a made up disease. At least i think so.... Aren't the nicest guys always taken though?

Yea i understand that. But it could've ended a couple different ways. I'm sure you'll make the decision of how to end it and i'm sure it will be wonderful ...

I fixed everything you said (I can't edit for my life honestly so this place is perfection for me) and i fixed the second part you couldn't follow. The first ...

Oh my goodness i didn't even notice the "I" and i proofread it a couple times and completely missed it. My English teacher when she taught poems to us a ...

Chocolate is poisinous to animals

Thanks a lot for that i'm so used to my friends critiquing my work and this i definitely enjoyed reading it. Also i'm going to keep it "Her voice tries ...