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Re: Camera
Hiya, darling! I'm Music. A camera can be a single moment, [s]A[/s] a single memory. Only capitalize when you begin a sentence.:wink: A camera can catch a lifetime of smiles, ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: It'll Be Okay
Hi, darling. First of all I want to let you know this is a wonderful poem. I'm going to help with the punctuation. :) She holds her child close, clutched ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: The Test
To Fire: I know it's Tae Kwon Do, I'm in it, too. I just call it karate. Haha.
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: random part of a story - revised
Hi, Mimi! Here as requested! Maeve shivered as the wet grass beneath her bare feet brushed against her ankles. The sunlight was being blocked out by the surrounding trees , ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: To Society:
I thought this was a wonderful poem. I had a friend who is bi, so I understand this. Great poem, and no grammar errors that I found, which makes me ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Those blue eyes
I love this! It's great and has a wonderful meaning. What a sweet guy to write his girlfriend poetry... :)
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: YWS Bill of Rights
Nicely done. :)
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: when its gone
Farikk! Why did you take down your poem? Did I give too harsh of a review? Now I feel terrible... *sulks* Please, put it back up!
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Meep wants her money back to buy a Cheeseburger!
Sadly, Meep, this is true. I don't like the gushing people (well, teenage girls) anymore. I'm out of that stage. And what I'm most sick of is people reading it ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Meep wants her money back to buy a Cheeseburger!
Meep, even though I'm a die-hard Twilight fanatic, I would never attempt to assassinate you. Haha. I guess I'll just have to live with the fact that you don't like ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Break my Heart and Hope to Die- Chapter 1
Okay. :) I was just mentioning that so you know someone else has been called that, too. I'll try and brainstorm some ideas for her. Maybe she can just call ...
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: Break my Heart and Hope to Die- Chapter 1
Okay. :) I was just mentioning that so you know someone else has been called that, too. I'll try and brainstorm some ideas for her. Maybe she can just call ...
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: Edward Cullen/Viagra Parody
Hahahaha. I'm a huge Twilight fan, and I thought I'd hate all parodies. But this one made me laugh. But, it should be rated R. So the little kiddies can't ...
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: Connections Part 1 - Lucy
Hi! I really liked this story idea! When I have the time, I'll sit down and make some corrections with the grammar if I find any. I'm a grammar freak; ...
Feb 18, 2009 -
Re: Masquerade chapter 1 part B
Hi! I am going to critique this when I have time. I'm too busy these days! I'm glad you posted more; keep it up!
Feb 17, 2009