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Hello, darling! Here to review for you. :) First, let's see about the grammar: Drifting into dreamland, Staring at the sky, I know there’s some reason; Still I wonder why. ...

Hey! I'm Music. Umm, here's my review. :) Grammar: When all is said and done, who can say they've won? The bodies lying in the streets, the blood flowing beneath ...

Hiya, darling! I'm Music. A camera can be a single moment, [s]A[/s][b]a single memory. Only capitalize when you begin a sentence.:wink: A camera can catch a lifetime of smiles, [s]A[/s] ...

Hiya! I'm Music, and I'll be your reviewer today. The yellowed light that fell through the window cast shadows that stretched to the corners of the room. [s]Teh[/s][b]The artist picke ...

Hi, darling. First of all I want to let you know this is a wonderful poem. I'm going to help with the punctuation. :) She holds her child close, clutched ...

Music here- as requested. Planning to do a complete grammar, spelling, and what not check and then overall impressions. :) Police were patrolling the building ' s perimeter, searching, guarding, ...

Hiya, Sock! I'm Music. I'll review your grammar for you. :) I trip over sidewalks[s],[/s] ; I trip over plants . I trip over pebbles and the hem of my ...

Hey, Voice! Music here. Here to critique, that is. I loved this song. It was beautiful yet melancholy. Sadly, I haven't heard "You are Everything", so I didn't exactly know ...

Hello, niteowl! I'm afraid I'm no poet expert, but I shall try and give a helpful review. I actually like the phrase "believing it to be" in the poem better ...

Hiya, Bittersweet. I'm reviewing you (it's kind of obvious by now), and my name's Music. Nice to meet ya. On to the poem. Hehe. As erratik noted, I thought it ...

Hey, Pink. I'm Music and I'll be reviewing you today! My favorite stanza was probably the repeating one: Burn the books! Smoke the ashes! Dissolve the traces! Of their disease! ...

Epic win. :) Although, it is spelled Black Cat Sachiko, I think. :wink: Pretty darn awesome trailer, once I got over the caps. Hehe. Love, Music. :)

Hi! I'm not really confident in reviewing poetry, but oh, well. :oops: I liked this poem! I was intrigued by how you used figurative language to describe some types of ...

Here as requested, my darling! Vashoa stared out over the large space[s],[/s] - empty, except for some shrubs and rivers she called home. Vashoa started back to the old, ramshackle ...

Hello, darling! I'm Music, and I'll be reviewing this piece [obviously]. Anyway, I see you're new here! Welcome to YWS! I suggest you head to the Welcome forum and post ...