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Re: Breakable
Hey racket! Maddiesho here to leave a review (: I loved the way you opened your poem We all together hold the future in our hands It introduces the idea ...
Nov 16, 2015 -
Re: Comfort Food
Hey cleverclogs, Msho13 here to give you a review (: So I really like how you opened up, My tears slide down the sneeze guard of the buffet as I ...
Nov 4, 2015 -
Re: My Little Girl
Hi TheDarkWriter, Msho13 here to give you a review (: So I really liked how you started the poem with imagery because the readers will imagine this innocent beautiful daughter ...
Oct 30, 2015 -
Re: Dreamcacther
Hey hippyhoodrat! Msho13 here to give you a review (: I love how you opened the poem, I remember you game me a dreamcatcher It allows for the poem to ...
Oct 30, 2015