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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Breakable

    Hey racket! Maddiesho here to leave a review (: I loved the way you opened your poem We all together hold the future in our hands It introduces the idea ...

    Nov 16, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Comfort Food

    Hey cleverclogs, Msho13 here to give you a review (: So I really like how you opened up, My tears slide down the sneeze guard of the buffet as I ...

    Nov 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: My Little Girl

    Hi TheDarkWriter, Msho13 here to give you a review (: So I really liked how you started the poem with imagery because the readers will imagine this innocent beautiful daughter ...

    Oct 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Dreamcacther

    Hey hippyhoodrat! Msho13 here to give you a review (: I love how you opened the poem, I remember you game me a dreamcatcher It allows for the poem to ...

    Oct 30, 2015


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