- Re: What Would You Think Of ME Dec 22, 2015
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Re: At the Lake - Scene
Wow! This has great context and I love the way you can make words flow together. There isn't really much to review you on, I can't find anything wrong with ...
Dec 22, 2015 -
Re: I Do
Hey, this is a great work, but I almost think that the way you try to rhyme your words dictates the way you wrote it. Also there wasn't any real ...
Dec 11, 2015 -
Re: Burden of the Heart
Thanks for that! I really appreciate any feedback I can get, because no one in my family knows anything about literature.
Dec 9, 2015 -
Re: Apathy (0.37 MB)
I like this a lot, actually. It has a very lyrical rhythm to it that is very catchy when I read it in my head. This makes me think, and ...
Dec 8, 2015 -
Re: Pete's Feet
This one doesn't have the sadistic humor he usually writes with, but other than that it makes me smile.
Dec 4, 2015