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MsPoetry15

  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Broken Clock

    This poem is really from your heart, and I think the best poems are the ones that define what you are going through at the time. It's not always easy ...

    Jun 10, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Evie summers novel Gifted Chapter one

    Hey, I really enjoyed this piece. However, I found that several grammatical errors were prominent, and I also noticed a few misspellings. Those can always be fixed, but I would ...

    Jan 1, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Logic of Life

    Hello, it's MsPoetry15 for a review! This poem was such a cheerful and oddly quirky in an adorable and interesting way. It's a great work, however I saw a few ...

    Dec 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Crimson Roses - Chapter One

    Hey, I really liked this. However, it was a little unclear who was who in this. You use a lot of "they" and it's hard to figure out who "they" ...

    Dec 22, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: to those who doubt their own beauty

    Hello: Here's a review for you! First, you have a beautiful way of putting words together. I really enjoyed the imagery you created in this poem, so good work! However, ...

    Dec 21, 2015


Act in the valley so that you need not fear those who stand on the hill.
— Danish proverb