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MsPoetry15

  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Broken Clock

    This poem is really from your heart, and I think the best poems are the ones that define what you are going through at the time. It's not always easy ...

    Jun 10, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Evie summers novel Gifted Chapter one

    Hey, I really enjoyed this piece. However, I found that several grammatical errors were prominent, and I also noticed a few misspellings. Those can always be fixed, but I would ...

    Jan 1, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Logic of Life

    Hello, it's MsPoetry15 for a review! This poem was such a cheerful and oddly quirky in an adorable and interesting way. It's a great work, however I saw a few ...

    Dec 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Crimson Roses - Chapter One

    Hey, I really liked this. However, it was a little unclear who was who in this. You use a lot of "they" and it's hard to figure out who "they" ...

    Dec 22, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: to those who doubt their own beauty

    Hello: Here's a review for you! First, you have a beautiful way of putting words together. I really enjoyed the imagery you created in this poem, so good work! However, ...

    Dec 21, 2015


Lots of times you have to pretend to join a parade in which you're not really interested in order to get where you're going.
— Christopher Darlington Morley