MrTalljoker

Well then, im very sorry I read it like that then. I simply viewed it as a poem and not a song. However, overall Id still stick to my criticisms ...

Thanks. I can't honestly tell you where the idea came from, I just got the idea as I was driving down the road and thought it'd be a cute idea ...

I don't care that you didn't see the poem like I see it, of course you're not going to. It's art, as soon as something's released it doesn't matter what ...

As soon as I posted this, I knew I was going to get that comment "NEW PUNKS NOT ALL BAD!" I know it's not, I never stated this, I never ...

Thank you for your suggestions.

I thank you for your review and its praises. Just to clarify, yes Im into punk music. This poem is mostly pointed at stuff like the mondern incarnations of the ...

Thank you for your kind words.

Thanks to my OCD, the formating is ugly to me. Thank you though for your kind words.

Thank you for your kind words.

Thank you for your review. I agree with you on the stanzas, the actual work used what you were talking about, but thanks to YWS awful formating options, I couldnt ...

Thats good that you wrote what comes to mind, its an important part to a first draft. I just think this work needs more revision is all. I honestly dont ...

Thank you for your comments, I do appreciate them.

Thank you, both for your review and comments, I appreciate it.

Thanks for your comments, I appreciate them.

So let me get this straight, you want me to just lay it all out for you or something? hm? Oh I'm sorry am I not spoon feeding you enough? ...