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Re: Aeon 288-0, 288-1
This was a very interesting journal. It seems as though you spent a lot of time thinking this through and making sure that it was perfect, and it definitely shows. ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: Silenced (Prologue)
Hi there! I really enjoyed the prologue, and I will definitely be reading the rest of the story. I didn't notice many problems, but there was one part that bothered ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: John's Journey
It's a nice story. I enjoyed it, but I thought that you could draw it out more, and make it into a much longer story, and getting us involved in ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: Turmoil
The idea is really interesting. I've always enjoyed reading stories about the struggle between heaven and hell, and the creatures that exist in these two separate realms. One mistake that ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: Save You, Save Me [Edited]
I really enjoyed the story. It was very exciting, and it kept me wanting to read more about the whole family, and the end really surprised me. More so than ...
Sep 7, 2014