MrBrainwasher

Funniest thing I read today.

"Nature and Nature's laws lay hid in night God said let Newton be and all was light" I had that piece in my subconsciousness, could be the reason I wrote ...

First of all, thanks for this thoughtful review Elinor. Nope, I didn't write it for fun or for class. I wrote it because I could relate to whatever Musk was ...

Thanks :)

Thanks :)

Totally agreed, I should have reorganized it. My point was simple, our lives are infinitely chaotic and so is the nature of this universe, and so is true for the ...

It is beautifully written.

First thing, congratulations that you think as a writer. You have a motive. You just write, it will come out eventually. It will need edits, which would only prune the ...

To get rid of the generalization, my best advise would be, GRRM! Yes, George R R Martin says, no human being is solely evil or good. They are the amalgamation ...

Yes. That's why you could have written this as a third person(yeah, there are many people who don't like to write in third person, e.g George r r martin).But that ...

All my best wishes with you.

ok. If that's the point of story, I belive Gazeltiel wasn't given the same attention as Ferryn was.

ok

thankyou :)

I thought before writing that I wouldn't generalize. You're right ,I shouldn't have. It must have been edited out. Because I remember using 'most'. Thanx for the review.